A3 Myth Final














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  1. This is like...really freaking funny. There was a lot of text but I didn't feel like it overwhelmed the space too much or was unnecessary. I wonder if there would be a way to hand letter it that doesn't get too messy. I really like the way you wrote the text for the mountains and it kinda made me want everything hand lettered. Also I almost missed "obviously the woods" which is too good to miss.

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  2. I really enjoy the style of this comic and the way you handled your bubbles and panels. I also think your color scheme is really working here. It was a little hard to grasp what was going on though, I wish there was more of an introduction so that I as the reader could understand the world and story a bit more. Your jokes and jabs at things like Uber and minimum wage definitely hit, I just wish I had more context. It's also really impressive how you managed to create the feeling of different environments within your limited color scheme. I guess my final critique would be that I wanted Bezos to actually look like a dragon in the end since he was called one on the pervious page.

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  3. Your colors and scenery do a good job conveying the middle earth feeling, which does make the satire /parody a little easier to pick up on than in your black and white sketches where you had to look a little closer for the Tolkien references. The scenes in the snowy mountains and the goblin cave do feel somewhat flat compared to your other pages however. The political jokes feel cleverly worked in to the narrative! but I'm not sure I get what role Elizabeth Warren plays in the story; we see her in two panels and then just kinda vanishes? Also just a couple notes on the type: I'm not sure if the all caps / small caps you're using is the best choice for the dialogue, and the few random dialogue bubbles that use lowercase feel easier to read as a speaking tone, unless the character is shouting. The location names do feel a little lost, and could either use a border around them or simply larger text and better placement.

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  4. I really like your color palette and the humor and digs are very spot-on. It's mainly in the first two panels of the first page, but the reading order of the text bubbles was very unclear and I wasn't sure who was supposed to be talking first. I also wish it was a little easier to read the non-dialogue text. Maybe adding boxes around them or just making the text a little larger would help.

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  5. This is so... 😂 😂 😂 Your style fits the story so well. I love the humor and ironic element in it. The handwriting of page 3 and 4 is successful in expressing, wish to see it on the word bubbles. Maybe think about how different characters will talk would help. Love their facial expression btw, this is super fun to read.

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